What do you think of my storyline?

Wow, this is extremely creative. I love it, briliant job. The only thing I dont like is that they're vampires. The whole vampire thing is seriously overone even thoughive never ever seen ti done like this. I think you should give them some other characteristic that makes them much different than vampires. But I really really love the idea, especially about JOhnathan and Chris being reincarnations of Soldat and Oro. Awesome jbo